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Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2012 6:51 pm
by kurosu.chan
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Deep in the dark in the deep dark woods, nary a traveler strays
For paths will keep crossing and turning and tossing in distressing and magical ways.

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Paths that keep changing are threads rearranging a traveller’s journey for days
Though not without hazards, where all paths have gathered there is a way out of the maze.

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But heed not this story, I'll give you fair warning, your last days await you in vain
Those who do not fear await their ends here, and escape is the last thing to gain.

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The creatures that live here are not what they seem, though beauty and glamour they wear
All that they ask of a traveler is that you stay with them, evermore, there.

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Fear not! Fair maidens, anxiously waiting, these creatures are rare to be seen
But stray off alone, dear, and care you must take, lest the last thing we hear is your scream.

Re: Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2012 7:30 pm
by yarwel
I love your photos; they match the poem perfectly. Did you write the poem yourself or are you quoting? If you're quoting, who wrote it? I love the surreal quality of your photos; that random frame hanging in the background is really interesting.

Re: Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Sun Sep 09, 2012 9:03 pm
by kurosu.chan
Thanks! I wrote the poem :?

Re: Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 9:50 am
by yarwel
Don't feel sheepish! It's a really great poem.

Re: Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 10:27 am
by mica
This is absolutely Enchanting !!
I love your poem and the magical way they go together--
Wonderful

Re: Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 1:40 pm
by SoapBubbles
Really enjoyed reading your poem. :D Great job with the photographs too, they really fit the atmosphere made by the words.

Re: Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Mon Sep 10, 2012 6:25 pm
by kurosu.chan
Thanks everyone! I'm not really sheepish about the poem, so much as the fact that I'm half tempted to do a whole series like this in poetry...xD

Thanks, mica! I'm glad you think so, because "enchanting" was kinda what I was going for. :)

Re: Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:21 am
by MelodyT
Absolutely beautiful! Keep writing... you have a wonderful talent! So too with your photography... it matches the words so well. Good job!!!!

Re: Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Fri Sep 14, 2012 7:52 pm
by kurosu.chan
MelodyT wrote:Absolutely beautiful! Keep writing... you have a wonderful talent! So too with your photography... it matches the words so well. Good job!!!!


Aw, thanks! :D

Re: Deep Dark (in the woods)

PostPosted: Tue Sep 18, 2012 12:10 pm
by Crystalinewings
This is beautiful! You are very talented.